Happy Pancake Poem!
Flipping light
A long streak of white moon slides
drops of silver on to a hairy earth.
When a sly street lamp scatter guns
neon candy it bounces
off unsuspecting geometric symmetric
random roof tops.
Neglected horizons fall in line for sunrise.
Everything too tall to beat to the bird song
Is painted orange.
Morning is a grand design.
Enjoy more work inspired by the first thoughts of the morning here and below
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Thanks for including my poem in this inspiring list!!
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A pleasure. I love your poem ‘Let Me Be Me’ too. Awesome!
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That’s awesome! But the word ‘pancake’ makes me starved!
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It’s true, pancakes are so basic but today they feel like a luxury (nutella and sugar on top!). I had a great time reading your poetry on Greeting Cards. Your handwriting is breathtakingly beautiful. Here’s to a happy year ahead!
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Hahahahaa….Let me have some pancakes tomorrow.
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😀 😀
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Love it..
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I adore the concluding line: Morning is a grand design. Yup.
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Thrilled to hear we are fans of morning! Things look great first thing. I just read your beautiful post about serenity and it got me totally in the heart. Awesome.
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Thanks so much for the link back. The poem is wonderful. I especially was taken by this line: When a sly street lamp scatter guns
neon candy it bounces
off unsuspecting geometric symmetric
random roof tops.
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Thank you for this wonderful comment it has made my day! ;-D
I am inspired by your blog. The topic that we are never too late to be courageous is a message that is so important and you write about it beautiful. So excited to read more. Empowering stuff!
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My cousin is an inspiring woman. And as for my comment about your poem. I don’t know much about poetry, but I do know what I like 🙂
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😀 😀 😀
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“Everything too tall to beat to the bird song/Is painted orange.” Lovely! Even in the city, sunrise is a thing of beauty. 😛
Nice to see you back, Lita!
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Thank you! I miss the people of WordPress when I have been away even though we never meet in person, it’s funny how much encouragement and positive energy bloggers have for each other. Lovely to connect. Your images and Haikus are so beautifully matched, they always open up a new world to me. I’m excited to follow more of your poetry 201 series.
Agreed, no matter what the landscape, sunrise is always a beauty! Thankfully!! 😉
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🙂
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For me happiness and pancakes are synonymous; but having pancakes, happiness and poem in the same sentence is even better. 🙂
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Here’s to happy words and yummy desserts. You have some brilliant photography features on your blog, I am new follower and look forward to enjoying more.
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I just enjoyed your awesome guest post on Janice’s Blog Linda! You offer great advice and I came away with some good tips, like paying attention to the visual side of blogging. Thank you heartily for this pingback! I look forward to your next guest post, you are on a roll!
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‘Everything too tall to beat to the bird song’ – this is my favourite line. Love the subtle rhyme and rhythm. Not to mention the imagery. Lovely!
Makes me sad I didn’t have a pancake 😦
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I ate one for you! I came back from the dentist and got told to eat lots of sweet things to test out a filling so have been filling my boots with dessert.
I just had a great time hanging out on your blog. You have so many exciting projects underway. It’s inspiring to follow your journey and I wish you a big bag of success with everything you are applying yourself to. The aerial work is super impressive.
Thank you so much for this lovely comment 🙂
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That’s very unusual for a dentist to suggest binging on sweet things, but great for you!
I treated myself to a wholemeal wrap with chocolate spread and banana. Almost the same thing. Almost.
That’s awesome! Thanks so much for your kind comments, it’s nice coming on to find some messages waiting 😀
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Bananas taste so much better with chocolate. Great choice!
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They sure do! It’s almost like they were made for each other. 😀
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A great image of morning. Who doesn’t want to start that day.
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Thank you. Some days nature offers such a bright landscape it’s dictating the poetry! I loved your recent post about Cuba. I could read more, I didn’t want it to end! Looking forward to my next visit.
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Thanks for the kind comments. Writers, like actors, need audience response to keep going. Even we introverts.
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So true!
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Love you poem…
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So kind of you to say this. I had a great morning enjoying your beautiful website. ‘Where the Aisles meet the pews’ is awesome.
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What a beautiful view you have of your mornings…and beautiful words to go with it too 🙂
Happy March Lita, Hope you are doing well. Lots of love your way,
Zee ❤
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Happy March Zee! Thank you for your awesome comment. Yes, I like mornings when the sun shines 😉 I love the stunning layer of snow your captured in your blog post. I had a top time catching up with your site. Your ‘Running’ poem is a winner! 😉
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Thanks for sharing. Love also the pix! Wishing you Happy Spring! 😃
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Always a pleasure. So lovely to see the sun at last! 😉
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Pancakes! Yea!!
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😉
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Love me some pancakes!
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